Set up is not important
In the past just the traditional family existed. Nowadays it is normal if someone is divorced, lives in a blended family or in a forster family. In my opinion it is not important in what kind of family you live. The only thing that is important for me is that you get enough love. In the following essay I will explain you why love is the only thing for me which decides if you live in a good or a bad family.
As I said before for me only love matters. Also in a traditional family are problems. There could also be domestic violence. Especially in the past in traditional families domestic violence was day life.
On the other hand I understand if people say that it shouldn’t give gay families. I don’t think that they aren’t as good as other parents but most people and children couldn’t accept things which are different. I think the children of a gay family would be bulled in school so that would be just a con.
Also that single parent families have not enough time for their kids is a big partiality. I think that is wrong, sure they have to work the whole day and so their children are alone at home but is that really a con? I don’t think so. These children learn earlier to look after them self.
Nowadays I think the primary is that you have friends. When you have real friends you don’t need a family than your friends are your family. Above all in the puberty the most teenagers accept their friends more than their family. Their friends understand them and feel with them. Sometimes you don’t need someone who is related by blood, you need someone who likes you and really tries to understand you.
To sum up I have to say again that just love matters and I hope that I could show you that it isn’t important if you are a traditional family or something else. If you have a family or friends whose love you should be lucky and try to show the every time you can that you love them. You should never take them for naturally because if you don’t guess them you will lose them and never get them back.
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exp: "Nowadays it is normal if someone is divorced, lives in a blended family or in a forster family." ->??? incomplete sentence
str: in a traditional family THERE are problems
exp: "domestic violence was day life" ???
exp: THERE shouldn't be gay families
t: most people and children CAN’T accept things
exp: they would be BULLIED
exp: "so that would be just a con" ???
[Introduction: Your introduction is incorrect as you already start to argue here.]
exp: "Also that single parent families have not enough time for their kids is a big partiality. " C??? -> It's a prejudice that ... do not have enough time for their children. I think it's wrong even though I admit that they have to work all day ... [This argument is very very flawed because you first claim something is wrong and then you admit it's true but claim that it's not negative.]
g: themselves
exp: "Nowadays I think the primary is that you have friends. " C??? primary = ein WAhlsystem in den USA
exp: ... a family because then your friends are your family.
[This paragraph is totally unrelated to the rest of the essay.]
exp: it isn't important WHETHER you live in a ...
exp: ... or SOME OTHER KIND OF FAMILY
g: friends WHO love you
exp/g: "whose love you should be lucky and try to show the every time you can that you love them. You should never take them for naturally because if you don’t guess them you will lose them and never get them back." --> ... you should consider yourself lucky and show them that you love them, too. You should never take them FOR GRANTED because if you don't ESTIMATE (???) them you will ...
Your argumentation is not really sufficient and adequate for B2 level. You frequently express yourself incorrectly too. So this is quite insufficient.
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